Narrative writing

 20/09/2021

WALT: Express myself in Narrative writing

Once upon a time there was a vicious k9 named jack almost 2 meters tall that went to the park at Awanui for a rock concert. Firstly he signed up for a lottery that would be drawn that night. while he was checking out the area but he didn’t realise that his tickied was slipping out of his mouth. After a while he bumped into another dog and he said, “ Hi my name is Jack what’s your name?” She said, “My name is Lila, what are you doing at a rock concert ?” Jack answered, “Just came to win twelve thousand dollars with this ticket and listen to my favorite band.” Lila askes,  “Do you mean that ticket?”

Fly away ticked

Jack runs after the ticket but the wind was too strong. The ticket was flying as fast as a cheetah but Jacky wasn’t giving up so he tried to tack a shortcut but when he got to the end of the park the ticket had disappeared. but when Jack looked around there were heaps of tickets that were flying but there was one that had Jack's paw mark on it. He was searching for hours but now “It’s almost time for the lottery!” Jack said and I still haven’t found my ticket yet.

Found ticket

When Jack just lost hope he heard someone call out his name he looked around and saw lila holding a ticked jack ran to lila and she gave it to him. Jack was so happy he didn’t even care if he didn’t win the lottery. But out of thin air Jack was called up and appeared on the big screen and was so happy he fainted like haomen fants. but when his owner came over to take him home he was wide awake.