Asttle Writing

22 September 2021

WALT:  Express myself in Narrative Writing

Last week Jacky the dragon and his friend Nico went to the amazon but before

they got there they took the bus to the airport with a nice bus diver but when

they landed in australia Jacky looked confused was the bus driver on the bus

or was he at home when they hoped in, an angry bus driver sat there sterling

out the window. We greeted him but no response came then we taped him and

he answered saying, “My name is Millan, what are yours?” Jacky replica,

“Jacky and Nico.” Everyone got on the bus happily but as soon as they entered

the jungle the bus driver got angry and they asked Millan what’s wrong Millan

didn’t reapply and they slowly got off track but for two hours they were off track

and after that they stopped they were lost.

Lost in the amazon

Jacky tried to turn into a dragon but his powers didn’t work like they are

supposed to. But when he got his wing’s under control he was too tired to fly so

they had to find another way to see where they were. Jacky was so nice he

tried to help his friend to get up a nearby tree but they were way too short to get

up the tree so they asked millan but when they got there he was gone so they

were lost and the bus driver was out there somewhere. They shouted for hours

but no response came so they went looking for him but when the where just

about to give up when the heard someone scream in the disctedes so they ran

as fast as a cheetah to get to where they heard the scream but there was no

one in site so they turned around and there it was angina but this time it was

right behind them they turned around but what do they see just the angry bus

driver looking wired and amazed at the same time.

Found not lost

When they figured out what the bus driver was sterling at they were amazed at

what they saw there was a giant dragon skin floating around but the only

drogon there was the Jacky. Jacky took the skin and the sun was shining

\above him he looked around and saw his wing’s come back and he was a

dragon angina he flew around and saw the way out next thing he saw a

helicopter flying. They were saved when he blew fire and the helicopter was

there. Yey were finally home after a long and exciting day.

Jacky and his friend Nico went to the jungle. When they got there they met

millan who got them lost in the amazon.  At the end they got out of the amazon

and took the next flight home. What could they have done to get home quicker?