Narrative writing

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14 September 2021

WALT:  Follow the sequence of Narrative writing

Ice berg

One morning at 6:00 AM in Sweden during a snowstorm our superheroes Hemi the stealth man, Millan the shadow manipulation man and Edmon the fireman were taken to  Antarctica during a blizzard by their enemies Nico the acid man and his twin friends Jac and Jacob the water men. Edmon was knocked out violently like a piece of steel knocks out a person then Hemi and Millan were knocked out just the same. The heroes woke up hours later all on different points of the Antarctic. All they could see was nothing but snow hills and avalanches. They tried to get to each other but they only walked in circles. 

Problem

Our three superheroes were taken to Antarctica by their arch rival Nico and his friends Jac and Jacob the water men. They had been trying to capture these super heroes for years and even decades. “We finally got them where we wanted them, but it still isn’t enough.” Nico said to his twin friends.  He wanted to destroy them forever and make sure the superheroes will never find their way back.  But will he succeed? 

Solution

Hemi woke up feeling relaxed like a koala in a tree until he realised what had happened and he started searching for his two friends with the secret tracking devices they hid in their watches.  If they can just all get together,  they could finally get away from Antarctica.  Once the three friends found each other, they started plotting their escape. “We have one minor distraction to deal with, Nico, Jac and Jacob will start looking for us again.” But they had to make sure they didn’t try day after day. They gave them a little taste of their own medicine and put them in the middle of nowhere. Everyone was so happy but the supervillains weren't happy at all about what Edmon, Millan and Hemi had done to them.

Self Assessment:

What I Like about my writing:

• I loved that I could express myself.

• It was fun writing about superheroes and supervillains

• It was fun making things up.

What I need to do to improve my writing:

• Write my speech conversion properly

• Improve my writing skills by writing more “Show” than “Tell”