Narrative writing

 20/09/2021

WALT: Express myself in Narrative writing

Once upon a time there was a vicious k9 named jack almost 2 meters tall that went to the park at Awanui for a rock concert. Firstly he signed up for a lottery that would be drawn that night. while he was checking out the area but he didn’t realise that his tickied was slipping out of his mouth. After a while he bumped into another dog and he said, “ Hi my name is Jack what’s your name?” She said, “My name is Lila, what are you doing at a rock concert ?” Jack answered, “Just came to win twelve thousand dollars with this ticket and listen to my favorite band.” Lila askes,  “Do you mean that ticket?”

Fly away ticked

Jack runs after the ticket but the wind was too strong. The ticket was flying as fast as a cheetah but Jacky wasn’t giving up so he tried to tack a shortcut but when he got to the end of the park the ticket had disappeared. but when Jack looked around there were heaps of tickets that were flying but there was one that had Jack's paw mark on it. He was searching for hours but now “It’s almost time for the lottery!” Jack said and I still haven’t found my ticket yet.

Found ticket

When Jack just lost hope he heard someone call out his name he looked around and saw lila holding a ticked jack ran to lila and she gave it to him. Jack was so happy he didn’t even care if he didn’t win the lottery. But out of thin air Jack was called up and appeared on the big screen and was so happy he fainted like haomen fants. but when his owner came over to take him home he was wide awake.  

Asttle Writing

22 September 2021

WALT:  Express myself in Narrative Writing

Last week Jacky the dragon and his friend Nico went to the amazon but before

they got there they took the bus to the airport with a nice bus diver but when

they landed in australia Jacky looked confused was the bus driver on the bus

or was he at home when they hoped in, an angry bus driver sat there sterling

out the window. We greeted him but no response came then we taped him and

he answered saying, “My name is Millan, what are yours?” Jacky replica,

“Jacky and Nico.” Everyone got on the bus happily but as soon as they entered

the jungle the bus driver got angry and they asked Millan what’s wrong Millan

didn’t reapply and they slowly got off track but for two hours they were off track

and after that they stopped they were lost.

Lost in the amazon

Jacky tried to turn into a dragon but his powers didn’t work like they are

supposed to. But when he got his wing’s under control he was too tired to fly so

they had to find another way to see where they were. Jacky was so nice he

tried to help his friend to get up a nearby tree but they were way too short to get

up the tree so they asked millan but when they got there he was gone so they

were lost and the bus driver was out there somewhere. They shouted for hours

but no response came so they went looking for him but when the where just

about to give up when the heard someone scream in the disctedes so they ran

as fast as a cheetah to get to where they heard the scream but there was no

one in site so they turned around and there it was angina but this time it was

right behind them they turned around but what do they see just the angry bus

driver looking wired and amazed at the same time.

Found not lost

When they figured out what the bus driver was sterling at they were amazed at

what they saw there was a giant dragon skin floating around but the only

drogon there was the Jacky. Jacky took the skin and the sun was shining

\above him he looked around and saw his wing’s come back and he was a

dragon angina he flew around and saw the way out next thing he saw a

helicopter flying. They were saved when he blew fire and the helicopter was

there. Yey were finally home after a long and exciting day.

Jacky and his friend Nico went to the jungle. When they got there they met

millan who got them lost in the amazon.  At the end they got out of the amazon

and took the next flight home. What could they have done to get home quicker? 

spelling W9/T3

Spelling Groups, Week 9, Term 3, 2021
List 3	List 4	List 5	List 9	List 10	Extension 1
	Reo Zion Larell Jamie		Mihi Nico Edmon Skyla Samson Jacob Atama		Lucy Grace Kaydee Chase Hemi Koda Zana Millan Alani

List 3	List 4	List 5	List 9	List 10	Extension 1
	direction  cough  special  sausage  listen	wrestle  wrist  written  gentleman  produce  promote  progress  entire  chimney  costume	someone  everywhere hospital  sincerely  probably favourite  excited  chocolate  stopped tomorrow	alphabet  cultivate  geography  manage  representative  Antarctic decided government  material  Tokyo	thoughtfulness  settlement  tough  strategy  successful trouble  success  traffic  suitable  wealthy

First, make a copy and complete your set work on the next page below

Monday - Spelling list words and alphabetical order

Tuesday - Alphabetical order list words and Syllables

Wednesday - Alphabetical list words, then Guidewords from the Dictionary

Thursday - Juicy sentences (underline the word from your spelling list in your sentence)

Friday - Spelling test 

Spelling, Week 9, Term 3, 2021
Monday	Monday	Tuesday	Tuesday	Wednesday	Wednesday
Spelling List words	Alphabetical order	Alphabetical order list words	Syllables	Alphabetical order	Guide words
someone  everywhere hospital  sincerely  probably favourite  excited  chocolate  stopped  tomorrow	Chocolate Everywhere Excited Favourite Hospital Probably Sincerely Someone Stopped Tomorrow	Chocolate Everywhere Excited Favourite Hospital Probably Sincerely Someone Stopped Tomorrow	Cho - co - late Eve - ry - where Ex - cit - ed Fa - vour - rite Hos - pit - al Pro - ba - ly Sic - ere - ly Some - one St - op - ped To - mor - row	Chocolate Everywhere Excited Favourite Hospital Probably Sincerely Someone Stopped Tomorrow	Childlike Evangelist Exchange Feast Hopeless Primitive Sink Sought Stove Tomahawk

Thursday - Alphabetical  Spelling List Juicy Sentences - Underline the spelling list word that is in you sentence

Chocolate is a delicious treat, my favourite flavour is vanala.

You can’t be everywhere at once, i’m in school at the moment

I’m so excited to go to the crognale national park, to see the lions

My favorite animal is the lion because they are sneaky and are strong.

Do you have to go to the hospital for a checkup.  Hope you are healthy.

You probably won’t make it to the rock concert tonight because you have chores to do at home

I am speaking sincerely as a friend about us not playing with each other enough.

You are someone, not a nobody that is walking in a corner.`

You were stopped by the police because you were speeding

Tomorrow we will go to the south island for a vacation.

Empowerment

Today I learnt how to do the write thing when some one send's and empowerment message or comment.

We did a slid on it here's mine enjoy,

Narrative writing

•        

14 September 2021

WALT:  Follow the sequence of Narrative writing

Ice berg

One morning at 6:00 AM in Sweden during a snowstorm our superheroes Hemi the stealth man, Millan the shadow manipulation man and Edmon the fireman were taken to  Antarctica during a blizzard by their enemies Nico the acid man and his twin friends Jac and Jacob the water men. Edmon was knocked out violently like a piece of steel knocks out a person then Hemi and Millan were knocked out just the same. The heroes woke up hours later all on different points of the Antarctic. All they could see was nothing but snow hills and avalanches. They tried to get to each other but they only walked in circles. 

Problem

Our three superheroes were taken to Antarctica by their arch rival Nico and his friends Jac and Jacob the water men. They had been trying to capture these super heroes for years and even decades. “We finally got them where we wanted them, but it still isn’t enough.” Nico said to his twin friends.  He wanted to destroy them forever and make sure the superheroes will never find their way back.  But will he succeed? 

Solution

Hemi woke up feeling relaxed like a koala in a tree until he realised what had happened and he started searching for his two friends with the secret tracking devices they hid in their watches.  If they can just all get together,  they could finally get away from Antarctica.  Once the three friends found each other, they started plotting their escape. “We have one minor distraction to deal with, Nico, Jac and Jacob will start looking for us again.” But they had to make sure they didn’t try day after day. They gave them a little taste of their own medicine and put them in the middle of nowhere. Everyone was so happy but the supervillains weren't happy at all about what Edmon, Millan and Hemi had done to them.

Self Assessment:

What I Like about my writing:

• I loved that I could express myself.

• It was fun writing about superheroes and supervillains

• It was fun making things up.

What I need to do to improve my writing:

• Write my speech conversion properly

• Improve my writing skills by writing more “Show” than “Tell”

Equivalent Factions

 

Level two back to school

9/92021

WLAT: Describe how I’m feel

Level 2 back to school

This morning I woke up at 6:22 and got dressed for school. But I wanted to stay in bed all day because I was still so exhausted. I had to go to school today, so I went to the kitchen and helped my mum pack the lunch and I got the table ready for breakfast. I took out the cereal with spoons and then took the milk out. After breakfast we all hopped in the car. My mum drove us to school in her car.

When we got to school I had to carry my backpack and my sister's backpack because my sister rolled her ankle the day before. I was still exhausted when we got to school and excited at the same time. When I hopped out of the car I shouted, “Hello my gamers!” To my friends then went to my classroom and asked Atama, “Can you please put my chrome book on my table and my reading on the desk.” I also called out “Hello” to Mrs Jujnovich then I went and played Borderlands two with my friends Samson, Hemi, Nico and Atama and I was this guy named destroyer with a mini gun and I had to have two of the same gun’s  then I could use them. For example if I picked up a pistol I have to have two pistols to use it. I was excited to come back to school because I wanted to see my friends and to learn again. 

After the bell rang Sir came over the intercom with some news he told us who was in the top ten mathletics. Then we did Karakia and Mihi. Nico did the Karakia and Mihi did the Mihi and our Wiata was Te Aroha and Paparore. After we did Karakia and Mihi we went on to writing for twenty or thirty minutes. Then we went outside to play golden child and my team won Golden Child by three points. When we finished golden child we came back and were busy completing our writing. 

I had a wonderful day at school today because I could see my friends and finish learning that has not been completed. I could finally see my friends face to face, but we still have to stay two or one meters apart.