26/2/21 Pobble writing - narrative
Story starter!
The wind rushed through his hair as he descended the mountain at great speed. For most children this would be an exhilarating, even terrifying experience, but for Edmon it was just an ordinary journey to school…
Problem
The wire snaps, the sound the wire made before it snapped was a sudden snap, this is the sound it made creeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeak! Edmon falls onto the ground, but as he is falling he feels like the wind is trying to stop him from falling but then one minute later he is on the ground with a broken right arm, then when he wakes up from being knocked out he is very hungry.
Another Problem
But when he reached for his lunchbox he released that he dropped his bag. Now he is stranded and has nothing to eat except mango’s but at least he know the way to school, but one time it took him two hours to get there by foot, and his school only lasts for two hour’s but there was a short cut to school that no one knows about it is also scary but the crutches are really nice.
Conclusion
But when Edmon entered one of the creatures helped him to get to school on time so the teacher would not be mad at him for being late to school. This is how he got to school without his ordinary journey to school.
THE END
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