WALT use descriptive vocabulary to describe a moment in time.
I did my plan while. I found doing two paragraphs tricky to do. I can extend myself by doing a bit beater with more sentences in my writing.
I am a Year 5 student at Paparore School School in Northland, New Zealand. Mrs Junjovich is my teacher. My blog is a collection of my work at various stages, across different curriculum areas. Throughout my time at Paparore School I may share draft copies of my work for feedback and feed forward. Other times I will share my final published pieces. I would appreciate any feedback through leaving me a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment. Thank you